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What is so bad about it?
why do you look at it as bad?
I'm already dead on the inside,
so why not the outside?
It's complicated but this party of life
or any party is not for me.


drowning in a sea of water,
yelping for my life as water splashes into my nose,
and i can hardly breathe fresh air.
no one can save me from it.
i try to speak but my lips are too frozen with death.
life is just too hard to handle.
©2007-2009 ~Rainflowerbritt
:iconrainflowerbritt:

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two poems i guess

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:iconxlahalliax:
Wow...I really lik ehte metaphors you used in the second poem. Very...interesting...

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~ L x
:iconrainflowerbritt:
thanks, i think i use metaphors without realizing it. i just write. ha

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( >< ) My mind is always open. I don't think there's even a door.
:iconneongenesis-endsong:
I love the way you write, its so full of emotion dear :hug:

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"Man fears the darkness, and so he scrapes away at the edges of it with fire."
:iconrainflowerbritt:
thanks but thats all i am is emotion.

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(^_^)
( >< ) My mind is always open. I don't think there's even a door.
:iconmusic-equals-escape:
omg... good job... wish my poems worked that welllll... well done :)

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At this point I got bored and forgot what I was talking about.
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:iconrainflowerbritt:
THANKS,REALLY though

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(\__/)
(^_^)
( >< ) My mind is always open. I don't think there's even a door.

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